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Thursday, June 10, 2021

My Show Not Tell Writing

 

Task description: For this task I was given a set of "Tell sentences" and had to make a "Showing sentence" for the given sentence.

2 comments:

  1. Talofa lava Francisco

    I really like how you were able to describe all the telling sentences with personification. I did notice a tiny mistake in the showing sentence for: it was a stormy night.

    Questions:
    How did you come up with this?
    How long did it take?

    Bye Francisco

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    1. Talofa Zion,

      I really appreciate your comment. I also like the two questions that you managed to come up with.

      Thanks for your comment.

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