Honey Bees
The honey bees were flying around the hive. It had black and yellow stripes, a pointy stinger and hymenoptera. I had never seen a beehive before. I felt excited and intimidated standing there waiting to get a glimpse of the bees. My friend Spencer looked satisfied and my other friend Rangi looked terrified. Seeing how people get honey for the first time made me realise getting honey was hard. Next time I eat honey, I’m going to think about where honey comes from and look at the ways other people get honey in different ways.
Talofa Francisco your writing is great,
ReplyDeletebut... on the thing the sentence it is glitching. that's okay, the sentence is interesting and good.
But the bee looks kinda disgusting.
And it looks like it is about to spit honey and a great picture too.
(*Questions*)
Where did u get the picture?
Why did u choose it?
Why does it look disgusting?